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You hurt yourself today
To see if you still feel.
The needle tears me too,
But I will quickly heal.

All your broken thoughts
That I cannot repair,
We'll blow away together,
Fading into air.

Whatever you become,
My sweetest friend,
I will be right here,
With you 'til the end.

You may let me down.
I may fail you too.
But we will try again,
Because our love is true.
A response, of sorts, to the NIN (and more specifically Johnny Cash) song Hurt, borrowing many of the lyrics.
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Darkwinterthorn Featured By Owner May 11, 2013
Thanks so much! It's been years since I wrote poetry, but it seems to be coming back to me again :)
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